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Back from the night shift (Free verse) by Corey McHattan
Back from the night shift,
she stares at his body
draped diagonally across the bed
like some flaccid Adonis-
the sheet a discarded tunic,
cluttering the bed's end.
Then a return to the kitchen
and Billy's formula.
She had asked him to prepare it
but had not been surprised, on arriving home,
to find the bottles empty.
Standing at the bench
when Billy lets out a cry,
and suddenly it all seems too much.
A solitary tear breaks the lid
and glides the arc of her cheek.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.375
Weighted score: 5.3697944
Overall Rank: 3250
Posted: July 9, 2002 10:13 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 10:13 PM PDT
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