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Nagasaki clothes (Free verse) by Caducus
An all American fat boy named after a war criminal fell towards the ground birthing ‘Dai Nippon’ and flesh became shadows sound the seventh trumpet. An all Japanese boy named after ‘Tempura’ (deep fried fish) ran down a corridor past evacuee shadows screaming ‘OKASAN OKASAN’ wearing his Nagasaki clothes imprinted on his face. An all American fat boy the kamikaze orphan birthed two thousand children screaming through seven trumpets dressing our Earth Nagasaki clothes Imprinted on our conscience?

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Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4157
Posted: January 15, 2003 4:28 AM PST; Last modified: April 30, 2008 1:16 PM PDT
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