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Nagasaki clothes

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jan 2003 · Edited 30 Apr 2008 · 0 comments

An all American fat boy named after a war criminal fell towards the ground birthing ‘Dai Nippon’ and flesh became shadows sound the seventh trumpet. An all Japanese boy named after ‘Tempura’ (deep fried fish) ran down a corridor past evacuee shadows screaming ‘OKASAN OKASAN’ wearing his Nagasaki clothes imprinted on his face. An all American fat boy the kamikaze orphan birthed two thousand children screaming through seven trumpets dressing our Earth Nagasaki clothes Imprinted on our conscience?

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