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Drifting into Dreams (Free verse) by rjsimonson
Sun setting at my back.
Moon rising from my feet.
Thoughts drifting away.
Memories of hurt and dismay
Hurling around my mind.
Thinking of times when no one else was there.
Alone, in the Dark,
Where thoughts take on charicatures
of past and present memories.
Then Stars begin to twinkle.
Red is gone from the sky.
Life becomes a tranquil night, with vivid, bright stars.
Peaceful Dreams finally a drift
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Weighted score: 4.6666665
Overall Rank: 12224
Posted: July 8, 2002 7:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 7:55 AM PDT
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