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Drifting into Dreams (Free verse) by rjsimonson
Sun setting at my back. Moon rising from my feet. Thoughts drifting away. Memories of hurt and dismay Hurling around my mind. Thinking of times when no one else was there. Alone, in the Dark, Where thoughts take on charicatures of past and present memories. Then Stars begin to twinkle. Red is gone from the sky. Life becomes a tranquil night, with vivid, bright stars. Peaceful Dreams finally a drift

Up the ladder: ghost of one
Down the ladder: Grace

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.6666665
Overall Rank: 12219
Posted: July 8, 2002 7:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 7:55 AM PDT
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