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You Showed Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

You showed me how to love when no one else knew how You have taken me places I have never been and opened up the door You showed me what love is really like, wonderful and grand, I want to spend every moment with you, holding the palm of your hand You have taught me how to kiss, and told me I should dance You have cared for me so specially and given me a chance You showed me how to be myself and say whatever is on my mind You have reached to places in my soul I thought I would never find I want you to remember how much you really mean to me More than anything in this world, the ocean or the sea I want so much to tell you exactly how I feel You are the sun, the moon, the stars and my love for you is real

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[5] Win 8-Jul-02/7:31 AM Reply
The last 2 lines are beautiful.