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Forever your girl (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
There once was a us but that fell apart I didnt know it at the time But it broke my heart Its almost been a year Since I said those 3 words to you And I sit here and think Unsure of what to do Do I open my heart Let loose my hopes and dreams Or do I let my feelings drown In the deepest of the seas Would you think I was crazy And push me away Or would you take me in your arms And say you feel the same way I've tried to deny The love in my heart Forget about you And have a fresh start But you always appear In that spot in my mind And I think about how I wish That I could hit rewind Go back to the day we met Go back to the love we had Go back to the day it ended And made me so sad I'd change the way the story goes We never would have had that fight So that way I could be holding you now Kissing you in the night Though these words may not change the way you feel Or let me in your world I wanted to let you know I love you Chris And I'll always be forever you girl

Up the ladder: Night-mare
Down the ladder: Spot the difference

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 11975
Posted: January 1, 2003 9:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2003 9:13 PM PST
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