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Sunflowers for Natalie (Lyric) by mrfiend
Natalie i dream of you as i lay upon my bed All day long i wander through the fields in my head just collecting sunflowers in a beautiful bouquet that i may give to you on one fateful summer day. i'd call you on the phone but the number has been changed can't come to your house the police think i'm deranged Natalie you mean to me much more than i can say Me and 10,000 maniacs just sit around and pray one day we will walk hand in hand towards the setting sun i'll show you all my paintings of us becoming one Please just let me call you, drop the restraining order or i'll lock you in my truck and run down to the border i'll pick you the prettiest sunflowers that i can find as we run through the perfect world i've made within my mind

Up the ladder: Pleas Dont..
Down the ladder: Operation: Nielsens

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12809
Posted: July 7, 2002 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 12:52 PM PDT
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[2] deleted user @ 66.190.226.154 | 7-Jul-02/3:45 PM | Reply
FUNNY!!
[0] Tarquin De La Bog @ 213.1.45.14 | 16-Aug-02/8:32 PM | Reply
Sir, you are deranged. 0. This is scary stuff, and I do believe that the authorities that miss your presence in their institutions need to be notified.
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