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broken nail (Free verse) by blackball
were you scratching at the surface?
i thought i heard a noise from down below
it was an image i couldn't erase; a primal clawing at the earth
knowing i had done the right thing
sitting alone
finally peace
quiet
a shining moment in my dull life
the night sky engulfed my mind and i was left to think of nothing
for once, this made me happy
a single chalk-yellow light on a snow covered street
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9556
Posted: December 27, 2002 10:39 PM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2002 10:39 PM PST
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