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Break Dancing Charlie (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
A cartoon face with blow up hands. You wore sexy new top, and flip flops. While we were out shopping, a door ding. Men came in for more then Helter-Skelter. I sat three good feet from the boob tube. As your blood splashed down upon my back. So when I turned to catch it, your lost face. Cereal spilled all over my new pajamas. They dragged her with baby to kitchen, But damnit the best knifes were gone, so my new tooth grew in just fine thanks. For nothing was left, but your cursive. Now covered up chalklines at the hospice. For hippies that dance while nude, and. A story on t.v sure stole your sunshine, But never could a bent cross dare brand you. "My summer job comes once a year, Sir," said the pool man out loud to his bad hand. Under waters of chlorine your eyes burst. That was just no ordinary dual tape deck.

Up the ladder: As I lay
Down the ladder: Revision

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 5.7395887
Overall Rank: 1823
Posted: December 26, 2002 1:57 PM PST; Last modified: June 3, 2003 6:39 PM PDT
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[5] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 15-Jan-03/10:28 PM | Reply
was it my tape deck?
why must you ?
never mind.

watch out for the gas when you drop them in the tank.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > <~> | 9-Feb-03/6:20 PM | Reply
This poem. brings joy to my hearte. it's a triumph damnit i don't know why or how but i feel it... in my left knee cap... an old break dancing injury from back when they still called me sir flip rock. Sharon Tate was my biological mother. i am the the afterbirth working itself into a new line of conditioning products.
[n/a] zzinnia66 @ 64.252.90.210 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 3-Jun-03/6:59 PM | Reply
"searchin' my car
lookin' for the product
Thinkin' evry n.
is selling narcotics"
[8] Fear of Garbage @ 64.56.113.207 | 3-Jun-03/8:55 PM | Reply
the last satnza is my favourite. as it should be.
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