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Waiting (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
The sun dont shine as bright and the moon dont glow I miss the way you held me tight where ever we would go Waking up beside you in the morning sun In my heart I always knew that you were the one To rekindle our love I'd walk to space Ask for help from above Just to see your face I'll be waiting here until the break is though Waiting for you to hold me near so we can start anew

Down the ladder: From the Ashes of Descartes

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8922
Posted: December 24, 2002 2:46 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 2:46 AM PST
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[4] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 24-Dec-02/6:56 PM | Reply
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