poemranker ::Waiting by Sugarbbybuttrfly

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Free verse № 31692

Waiting

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

The sun dont shine as bright and the moon dont glow I miss the way you held me tight where ever we would go Waking up beside you in the morning sun In my heart I always knew that you were the one To rekindle our love I'd walk to space Ask for help from above Just to see your face I'll be waiting here until the break is though Waiting for you to hold me near so we can start anew

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[4] <~> 24-Dec-02/6:56 PM Reply
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