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Instinct (Free verse) by nentwined
Yellow tomcat lies with a siamese Summer heat and pheromones blinders one track mind chugging train black spewing clouds of ignorance spores drifting on a wind-less day infectious on touch a heady call of aroma arousing illusion bodily pleasure need to sate and finished yellow tomcat climbs from the unmoving siamese, neither observant of flies or other stages of death.

Up the ladder: Valentine
Down the ladder: Sublime Street Morals

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.909091
Weighted score: 6.9090905
Overall Rank: 225
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST
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[1]... anonymous @ | 24-Jul-01/1:03 PM | Reply
going somewhere with this one. last line most powerful. maybe you can up the play between instinct and indifference.
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