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Slow Dance (Free verse) by jdsnyd
heavy gelatinous humid air
lumbering through open window
screen stained nicotine yellow
the world moves by slower than normal,
machinery turned down a notch
conserving energy
music wafts in hanging heavy
in this carbon based soup
I'm inclined to linger here,
no will to build one movement on another
heart piercing blues riff shatters complacency
and my soul moans for Elysium wonder
down catacombs long repressed
immaculate cognizance leers menacingly
at the new world order
and paper trails leading nowhere
you always said we'd die here...
maybe that's not as bad as living here
one slip,
and into the jagged shards of arduous glass
seems I've bled rivers,
but it was never enough
distracted,
you tended your own wounds
as our sins manifested tumors on fertile skin
roving hooligan clouds
full of empty promises of rain
bore down on the human vortex
celebration and dancing began
at the mere promise of relief
relief that never came
too embroiled in Faustian zeal
no one took notice.... and the dance went on
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Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7643
Posted: November 15, 2002 2:35 PM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2002 12:11 PM PST
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I want more info on this story i'm at work and cant concentrate please give me the story of this if you can? (i only have chance to read/submit poems at work as i have no computer at home