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downtime (Free verse) by xanthippe
I, who stare too long at the sunset
of your eyes
thin strands of eyebrow clouds
soft mountain lash curves
meet the evertrusting ground
I, rest on your warm cheek hill
overlooking the deep spring
obscured by roses.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7642
Posted: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST
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