poemranker ::downtime by xanthippe

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Free verse № 22973

downtime

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Oct 2002 · 0 comments

I, who stare too long at the sunset of your eyes thin strands of eyebrow clouds soft mountain lash curves meet the evertrusting ground I, rest on your warm cheek hill overlooking the deep spring obscured by roses.

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