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downtime (Free verse) by xanthippe
I, who stare too long at the sunset of your eyes thin strands of eyebrow clouds soft mountain lash curves meet the evertrusting ground I, rest on your warm cheek hill overlooking the deep spring obscured by roses.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7639
Posted: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2002 12:14 AM PST
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