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The Church in Nagasaki

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 May 2002 · 4 comments

Poems shouldn't be mere Retelling of facts but I feel compelled to Make this solitary exception A Catholic church stood At the epicenter of The Nagasaki nuclear blast A brick column remains The bomb was blessed Before the airplane left The airbase for Nagasaki By a Catholic priest There's enough metaphorical symbolism And hard-edged timelessness present To satisfy poetic standards Giving it a voice

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[9] hoopoe 28-May-02/2:36 PM Reply
I like this so much that I logged on despite being otherwise occupied mostly right now, to say how much I like it. It has a voice all right. Reminds me of .. oddly, of cummings in his this kind of mode; and I really like and admire cuimmings' poetry
[7] Amelia 9-Jul-02/9:48 AM Reply
That is so sad.;(
[8] deleted user 9-Jul-02/1:04 PM Reply
very cool. kinda loses it a little last verse, but very cool.
[4] deleted user 11-Jul-02/9:31 AM Reply
how ironic