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The Church in Nagasaki (Other) by Staika
Poems shouldn't be mere Retelling of facts but I feel compelled to Make this solitary exception A Catholic church stood At the epicenter of The Nagasaki nuclear blast A brick column remains The bomb was blessed Before the airplane left The airbase for Nagasaki By a Catholic priest There's enough metaphorical symbolism And hard-edged timelessness present To satisfy poetic standards Giving it a voice

Up the ladder: Sansho-shima
Down the ladder: The Cad

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.928571
Weighted score: 4.9477816
Overall Rank: 8994
Posted: May 28, 2002 10:54 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2002 10:54 AM PDT
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[9] hoopoe @ 62.254.128.5 | 28-May-02/2:36 PM | Reply
I like this so much that I logged on despite being otherwise occupied mostly right now, to say how much I like it. It has a voice all right. Reminds me of .. oddly, of cummings in his this kind of mode; and I really like and admire cuimmings' poetry
[7] Amelia @ 198.146.136.22 | 9-Jul-02/9:48 AM | Reply
That is so sad.;(
[8] deleted user @ 217.158.29.177 | 9-Jul-02/1:04 PM | Reply
very cool. kinda loses it a little last verse, but very cool.
[4] deleted user @ 64.217.135.24 | 11-Jul-02/9:31 AM | Reply
how ironic
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