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Sansho-shima (Haiku) by spoink Even when she called
to break up with me, first she
told me her troubles.
Up the ladder:
Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941
Down the ladder:
The Church in Nagasaki
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Posted: May 17, 2002 11:08 AM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2002 11:13 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9477816 Overall Rank: 8993 Comments:
Yes. Yes...it's all falling into place. I think this poeme is quite good. However, no matter how many times I read it I still think it says 'break wind'. If it had been 'break wind', I probably would have fallen over and hurt myself in my delight. Just imagine...a fine afternoon, a date with one's best girl to break wind, and then she spoils it by telling you her troubles before the festivities can begin. The cheek!
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you seem better off without her. Get out more