poemranker ::Thawed by Roisin

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Free verse № 24359

Thawed

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Nov 2002 · Edited 12 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

Despite it's stunted days, Long nights and lethargy I'd begun to embrace the winter; Feel energised by still calm and Dormant magic, Comfortable with less light, More layers and Dead leaves in my path. You came back into my life Like a faded post-card, Arriving on my doorstep Three months too late. You made me mourn the end of summer. Threw me out of context. Stripped me down and left me standing naked on a frosty shore. Now the stone in my chest grows ever colder, Short day, Long night, Long night, Short day. Will you still be here when flowers bloom

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3 comments

[7] Caducus 15-Nov-02/9:18 AM Reply
thanks i enjoyed reading your shit

7 again
[n/a] Fear of Garbage 12-Mar-03/5:57 PM Reply
you have potential
[8] ecargo 18-Aug-03/5:51 PM Reply
The first stanza is great--the rest not quite up to it, but still really well done overall.