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Thawed (Free verse) by Roisin
Despite it's stunted days,
Long nights and lethargy
I'd begun to embrace the winter;
Feel energised by still calm and
Dormant magic,
Comfortable with less light,
More layers and
Dead leaves in my path.
You came back into my life
Like a faded post-card,
Arriving on my doorstep
Three months too late.
You made me mourn the end of summer.
Threw me out of context.
Stripped me down and left me
standing naked on a frosty shore.
Now the stone in my chest grows ever colder,
Short day,
Long night,
Long night,
Short day.
Will you still be here when flowers bloom
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9814
Posted: November 8, 2002 10:33 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2003 9:28 AM PST
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