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Radical Lament - I & II of XII (Free verse) by Wulf
On Self-pitying Madness
"Don't you stare me down," she cries
A fistful of pennies
"Stop looking at me!"
dripping from her hand
"I can see right through you!"
plink plink plink on the floor
Four 0' clock in the morning
she weeps her head down
Night shadows own the room
the flickering candle between them
Pondering a puddle of pennies
her resolve slipping away
Her face in the mirror laughs
On Incipient Rage
Between the spokes of his machine
A gun pushed down his pants
Calloused fingers push caress cloth on steel
barrel tight a crack of ass
chromed steel bated awe
Palm sweat itch strokes his piece
This motor room florescent
will quite ignore the dawn
though chill winds creep the glass
He hears her against the wall
Pistol leaps into his hand
barks a hole into her forehead
which photograph tickles the breeze
{CONTINUED}
copyright 2002 Thomas Paul (WORDWULF) SternerHowe
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Posted: October 31, 2002 8:29 PM PST; Last modified: October 31, 2002 8:29 PM PST
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