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Night Slips By Dusk (Free verse) by rick
Night slips by dusk like a panther
Poised and silent with deadly precision...
A small boy runs home
Racing the warmth of dinner
And the sharp blows of his fathers hand
Dinner rest uneasily in the pit of his stomach
Outside leaves sail freely
On the cool damp breeze of autumn
Rattling fear and excitement into the childs drifting thoughts....
Monsters
Tanned and bleeding
Reds and yellows
Bellows
In heaving gust
Beating hearts
Startled
Torn apart
Gnarled and twisted
Now the monster sees him
And closes in
Sword unsheathed
Rage unleashed
Strike back small boy, strike back...
Morning slips by dawn like a lion
Proud and humble with a disciplined hunger
The small boy sleeps warmly under blankets
As trees sway steadily in their firey dance
Hope is a rainbow of foliage
Burning into yet another day
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10091
Posted: October 31, 2002 1:10 PM PST; Last modified: October 31, 2002 1:10 PM PST
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