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Now (Free verse) by hoopoe The world is not difficult;
It could be arranged
for me to see a
phoenix erupting
from a burning tree.
But I did not;
I saw rooks
leaving their nests.
Up the ladder:
the small drop
Down the ladder:
Mistaken
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Posted: May 21, 2002 8:54 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2002 8:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.5 Overall Rank: 2683 Comments:
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Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69
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14-Aug-02/9:48 AM
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very nicely done. bravo.
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