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A Camille'an Sunset (Other) by muffin
Sometimes the night just holds me Sometimes I am lost for words Sometimes the sight engulfs me Perfect night Existing in perfect light Sometimes I just want to hold the sunset Talk to her when the world seems too complicated Sometimes I just want to say hello And fall asleep Sometimes I force the tears in It feels so good Sometimes I just imagine The kiss of the sunset My lips are truly embraced Sometimes I wish I never saw this sunset Perfection is impossible Impossible so much possible Potential, so beautiful

Up the ladder: Deceive Me
Down the ladder: electronically

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7556
Posted: October 22, 2002 11:17 AM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2002 11:17 AM PDT
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