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boom (Free verse) by UAFANTHORPEY
Boom shaka laka boom Boom Goes the robin shaka Boom Goes the bull Will you burst my bubble Cos I gave you trouble Boom Ride me like a donkey and leave me out to dry Boom A wacka wack wicked!

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12811
Posted: October 3, 2002 3:04 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 3:04 AM PDT
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[n/a] rosiebailey @ 212.219.142.161 | 3-Oct-02/4:52 AM | Reply
yeah yeah wickid mush you are da man
[6] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 3-Oct-02/7:00 AM | Reply
Who did that 'boom shaka laka' song? I also detect the 'wicky wicky wah' influence of Will Smith. Not sure what Mrs. Fanthorpe would think, though.
[6] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 3-Oct-02/7:29 AM | Reply
I don't see the UA Fanthorpe connection either, but I do see Shaggy.
[8] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 4-Nov-02/5:53 AM | Reply
Sublime, it brought a tear to my eye and a hand to my crotch
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