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M&Ms (Free verse) by knickytoy
There's something eating through my gut. Maybe it's the sugar high. I should be doing something Here, sitting, writing, eating, the future blob Is filling me up when it should be.... Piles of ifs, steaming hot, soooooo Tempting. What was his name? M&M? Ummm, I'll eat him Out of my mind. I guess I'm always empty 'cause of the hole.

Up the ladder: A Short Message to You
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10818
Posted: September 24, 2002 10:57 AM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2002 10:57 AM PDT
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[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 25-Sep-02/3:18 AM | Reply
You are some kind of sugar addict. I like the manic hunger of this
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