poemranker ::M&Ms by knickytoy

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Free verse № 16937

M&Ms

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

There's something eating through my gut. Maybe it's the sugar high. I should be doing something Here, sitting, writing, eating, the future blob Is filling me up when it should be.... Piles of ifs, steaming hot, soooooo Tempting. What was his name? M&M? Ummm, I'll eat him Out of my mind. I guess I'm always empty 'cause of the hole.

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[7] Christof 25-Sep-02/3:18 AM Reply
You are some kind of sugar addict. I like the manic hunger of this