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A Few Thoughts about a God of Love and Hell. (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom
I am God, And I love all of my children, Every single one of them, Even though it seems that, I forgot to ask if, Any of them wanted to become a human being. But anyway, As things have turned out, It seems that, Nearly every one of them are going, To end up spending an eternity, In the never-ending flames Hell. But then, There's not a thing that I can do about it, Since that is just the way things are. The way that things have turned out. God

Up the ladder: Society
Down the ladder: Deaf

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 3.903412
Overall Rank: 13431
Posted: September 20, 2002 11:53 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2002 12:05 PM PDT
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