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Rain (Other) by Jessina
Rain, my rain, my lovely rain As heaven’s pride you reign You come as silvery droplets of enchanting roar Tumbling from your lofty and exalted throne Satiating my heart as you pour When your first droplet touches my bare skin I beam with intense joy for a blissful hop Like a virgin maid awaiting her lover’s first kiss How charmingly you nurture my core Knitting my velvety dreams with your adoring hands Like a charming prince caressing his beloved Rain, my rain, my lovely charm Drench me in the showers of your love I lay here all alone in a lethargic trance To tune myself to your rhythmic dance

Up the ladder: makin bacon
Down the ladder: tile

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11447
Posted: July 30, 2013 2:20 AM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2013 2:20 AM PDT
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