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Thoughts (Free verse) by Moauram
Today it was another day just like those countless days which made me thick and thick caging with those petty thoughts. They came one after another just like those rippling sea-waves kissing those numerous sand-grains but disheartening many a kin. Whistling from those timeless breadths They made my mind - their dwelling place, Feeding on my hopes and longings And those vacuum-filled pregnant hours Yet, I wish, they did not come And would rather wait for that day, For I love their absence More than their presence.

Up the ladder: The Raw Vegan Potluck
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8794
Posted: February 16, 2012 7:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2012 7:49 PM PST
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[0] Skamper @ 124.181.76.40 | 9-Jun-12/5:12 AM | Reply
vaccum filled pregnat hours..*sigh*...
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