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Thoughts (Free verse) by Moauram
Today it was another day
just like those countless days
which made me thick and thick
caging with those petty thoughts.
They came one after another
just like those rippling sea-waves
kissing those numerous sand-grains
but disheartening many a kin.
Whistling from those timeless breadths
They made my mind - their dwelling place,
Feeding on my hopes and longings
And those vacuum-filled pregnant hours
Yet, I wish, they did not come
And would rather wait for that day,
For I love their absence
More than their presence.
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Posted: February 16, 2012 7:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2012 7:49 PM PST
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