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loss (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
This isn't a country song
It's a ballad to those who have lost
Lost sons and daughters innocent babes
Lost soul mates, that burning in your heart
Lost parents, that guided you through life
I'm not singin' about misplacing them,
I am singing about them being gone
and you are forever changed
loss hurts loss breaks, loss takes away
still you stand here, shaken by life
Confused, hurt, angred, saddend, devastated
Loss chips away and takes away pieces of who you are
When there is so much loss, there is nothing left
Ever had to make a tough decision
One that ripped your soul in two
Ever watched your innocent child
Die slowly from disease, suffering
Did they go over sees to make a better world
and not come back?
loss hurts loss breaks, loss takes away
still you stand here, shaken by life
Confused, hurt, angred, saddend, devastated
Loss chips away and takes away pieces of who you are
When there is so much loss, there is nothing left
Ever loved so hard your heart hurt
Did you lose your partner, your team mate, your lover
Dd they die suddenly or did you have to watch them go
Do you see them die in your dreams every night
Even if it was just a split up, losing the one you love
Seems to be a cruel joke of life
loss hurts loss breaks, loss takes away
still you stand here, shaken by life
Confused, hurt, angred, saddend, devastated
Loss chips away and takes away pieces of who you are
When there is so much loss, there is nothing left
Has your mom or dad died
the ones that lead you through life
made you who you are
Did you watch them go,
Or were they suddenly stolen
loss hurts loss breaks, loss takes away
still you stand here, shaken by life
Confused, hurt, angred, saddend, devastated
Loss chips away and takes away pieces of who you are
When there is so much loss, there is nothing left
through all this loss, you lose yourself
slip into insanity, eaten alive, devastated
In the mornings you wake up it's too much to take in
you can't open your eyes, can't get out of bed
Then from all this pain and losing who you were
you create an act of violence and take one more life from the world
everything is gone and black and you hurt no more
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6951
Posted: March 11, 2010 7:10 AM PST; Last modified: March 11, 2010 7:14 AM PST
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