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Free verse № 159537

a piece of me

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Feb 2010 · 2 comments

I'm finding out how lonely the early morning hours really are it may have been one day it may have been one week could have been a month but I'm finding out how much missing you hurts I don't know if I'll miss you just as much tomorrow because missing you this much today is agony I don't know how much I could stand Don't think I could miss you more than I do now It has only been one day and my heart strings sing out, like a guitar string strummed I just learned how lonely alone really is it's an empty feeling A feeling of wanting, endless waiting a feeling of emptiness I can't imagine a life with out you if I didn't see you for one week I would go insane from the pain So solitary these small hours of the morning are I'm holding on to the thought of you if I close my eyes and wish hard enough I can smell you and feel your warm touch I doubt, after one month I would be the same I would lose myself' because I'd miss you too much

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[2] jh99 28-Feb-10/12:47 AM Reply
I'm finding out how clichéd this writing is. If you want this thing to be better, come up with more original thinking. This sounds like every POP song I hate.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 › jh99 7-Aug-10/4:44 PM Reply
I'm sure it would please you to know I am writing a pop/ emo album.