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Loser (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
can some one come hold my hand
I'm so alone and hurt so bad
I hate hearing all these sell out songs
Losers singin about their love
We all get delt a bad hand every now and then
it's how you play your game that makes the difference
Some times life might throw a sucker punch
fate may try to keep you down
but we can show life we are stronger
and laugh in its face when we are victorious
I've been through life
I've had some fun
I've gotten in trouble and lost a lot
My heart and soul are hurting
And fate has made sure to bring me to my knees
We all get delt a bad hand every now and then
it's how you play your game that makes the difference
Some times life might throw a sucker punch
fate may try to keep you down
but we can show life we are stronger
and laugh in its face when we are victorious
I'm drowning and fading and no one sees
my desperate battle to cling to me
I know I'm losing the last thing I have, me
I'm losing myself and the hand life delt
I think I might fold
We all get delt a bad hand every now and then
it's how you play your game that makes the difference
Some times life might throw a sucker punch
fate may try to keep you down
but we can show life we are stronger
and laugh in its face when we are victorious
The towel is about to leave my hand
I'm about to throw it in, gonna wave a white flag
I have a little oil left in the lamp to keep shining
to keep me on my way
I'm afraid soon I won't go further
I just need to be strong and help myself
I cling to hope that some one will see me
some one who will care enough to help me
save myself
We all get delt a bad hand every now and then
it's how you play your game that makes the difference
Some times life might throw a sucker punch
fate may try to keep you down
but we can show life we are stronger
and laugh in its face when we are victorious
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.0
Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10986
Posted: November 30, 2009 10:20 AM PST; Last modified: November 30, 2009 10:20 AM PST
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