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Free verse № 150992

Eden

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Mar 2007 · 0 comments

Out there, beyond the white water and foam: Far from the shipwrecked gallies and whalers Through squalls of sheet rain, and thunder is an island of green canopy, fire, and jungle where giant stones chiseld by demon & angel peer past blue breakers and sun streaked palm at our divine sun's dance with darkness

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