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Eden (Free verse) by Bachus
Out there, beyond the white water and foam: Far from the shipwrecked gallies and whalers Through squalls of sheet rain, and thunder is an island of green canopy, fire, and jungle where giant stones chiseld by demon & angel peer past blue breakers and sun streaked palm at our divine sun's dance with darkness

Up the ladder: FAITH
Down the ladder: Loser

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Weighted score: 4.8102965
Overall Rank: 10964
Posted: March 14, 2007 3:45 PM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 3:45 PM PDT
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