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Eden (Free verse) by Bachus
Out there, beyond the white water and foam:
Far from the shipwrecked gallies and whalers
Through squalls of sheet rain, and thunder
is an island of green canopy, fire, and jungle
where giant stones chiseld by demon & angel
peer past blue breakers and sun streaked palm
at our divine sun's dance with darkness
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Posted: March 14, 2007 3:45 PM PDT; Last modified: March 14, 2007 3:45 PM PDT
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