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A sky not our own (Free verse) by The Bard
We suffer together
We suffer alone
Waking each morn
To a sky not our own
Oh hurt we do
Exquisite the pain
Tis home we want
To be there again.
The dream of return
Throbs in our soul
To just go back
To where we are whole
Here, not there
Not all is right.
Something amiss
A particle slight
It looks the same
But missing a part
It has not the essence
Which claims our heart
Not quite a fit
We can't find the beat
Tis alien soil
beneath our feet
Adrift in our pain
Oh how we do cry
Just to greet the morn
And see our own sky
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5484
Posted: October 31, 2009 7:16 AM PDT; Last modified: October 31, 2009 7:16 AM PDT
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