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The Darkness (Other) by izzy shafer
Let it come
Let it take me
Slowly, taking over
Then swallowing me whole
The Blackness
The peace and blackness
So still, So beautiful
No sound, no pain
Only blackness
I'm safe here
At peace, Pain free
I can breath at last
I see everything
And nothing at all
No one can see me
I am invisible to the world
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11669
Posted: July 27, 2009 7:49 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2009 7:49 AM PDT
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