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The Darkness (Other) by izzy shafer
Let it come Let it take me Slowly, taking over Then swallowing me whole The Blackness The peace and blackness So still, So beautiful No sound, no pain Only blackness I'm safe here At peace, Pain free I can breath at last I see everything And nothing at all No one can see me I am invisible to the world

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11643
Posted: July 27, 2009 7:49 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2009 7:49 AM PDT
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