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honey suckle (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
a sweet intoxicating fragrance
the air heavy with it
honey suckle so strong, a head full
dizzying, inundating, calming
this high hits her like a train
breaking her to her knees
blacking out her vision
taking her life, she gives in
the forgiving honey suckle
breathes a resurrection to her lips
it becomes her reason to inhale, to exhale
to continue on
it is her strength, and also her weakness
her addiction
so sweet it fills her lungs
from her lungs to her heart
from her heart to her head
this high flows through her veins
through her body
every inch awakened and alive
a glowing smile blesses her face
she feels it flowing through her
filling every inch
from her toes through her clothes
an electric charge
now a plane of peace
she rests alive yet in limbo
a bed of honeysuckle infusing her
surrounding every inch
drugging her, dragging her deeper
she surrenders to the flower
floating surreal
she's sinking beneath these bushes
they take her deeper
she is completely content
you should see her face
you would see truth in it
honey suckle blooms and dies every year
but her honey suckle flower will
bloom indefinitely
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5504
Posted: May 28, 2009 8:36 PM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2009 8:36 PM PDT
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