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Missing Her Again (Other) by rottweiler1982
In my little world I do what you must. Waking up in lost dreams' dust. Lusting for a life I long to be free. My past is like a knife that sticks in deep. A twister of love left nothing standing. What I had to have left me crying. Now I find myself where the sun won't shine. Stuck with memories of those cherished times. My heart in pieces, in a garbage sack. Wishing for someone who's not coming back. On a dead-end street out in the cold without the truest love I've ever known.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.142857
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7186
Posted: September 16, 2002 9:57 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 9:57 PM PDT
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[10] loneshadow29 @ 63.80.251.76 | 17-Sep-02/8:58 AM | Reply
heartbreak is such a rough thing to go through... but don't worry, something better will come to you... great poem by the way :o)
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