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I think of you (Free verse) by nicole081083
Whenever I wake up Whats the first thing I do? Grab my coffee cup? No baby, I think of you And whenever I go to bed Whats the last thing I do? Close my eyes and clear my head? No baby, I think of you I think about you girl Both day and night You are my world My darkness, my light Always and forever You'll be on my mind And I hope we're together Until the end of time

Up the ladder: Son
Down the ladder: lost at sea

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6185
Posted: December 15, 2007 6:04 PM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2007 6:04 PM PST
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[7] LynnJR @ 68.15.29.164 | 18-Dec-07/11:43 AM | Reply
very lovely poem, the feelings were expressed adequately, nice flow and rhyme.
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