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I think of you (Free verse) by nicole081083

Whenever I wake up Whats the first thing I do? Grab my coffee cup? No baby, I think of you And whenever I go to bed Whats the last thing I do? Close my eyes and clear my head? No baby, I think of you I think about you girl Both day and night You are my world My darkness, my light Always and forever You'll be on my mind And I hope we're together Until the end of time

LynnJR 18-Dec-07/11:43 AM
very lovely poem, the feelings were expressed adequately, nice flow and rhyme.




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