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Be My Dove (Free verse) by forsaken
You're the only one I want hun
They should have just took the sun
Without you it's been dark for years
Nearly drowning in my own tears
Barely making it from day to day
Happy once but sadly it didn't stay
As all beauty left along with you
As you walked away my heart spilt in two
Time past and it only started to shatter
Leaving me to believe nothing mattered
My smiles turned to being fake
Never even knowing why I should wake
Anger forming for those with smiles
The pain inside began to make piles
Never did I think this would end
Then an angel from heaven did god send
There must've been something good I did
To get another chance of having a kid
With the only woman that I ever loved
Will you take my hand babe and be my dove
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.090909
Weighted score: 7.0454545
Overall Rank: 34
Posted: October 26, 2007 3:17 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2007 3:17 PM PDT
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