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Be My Dove (Free verse) by forsaken
You're the only one I want hun They should have just took the sun Without you it's been dark for years Nearly drowning in my own tears Barely making it from day to day Happy once but sadly it didn't stay As all beauty left along with you As you walked away my heart spilt in two Time past and it only started to shatter Leaving me to believe nothing mattered My smiles turned to being fake Never even knowing why I should wake Anger forming for those with smiles The pain inside began to make piles Never did I think this would end Then an angel from heaven did god send There must've been something good I did To get another chance of having a kid With the only woman that I ever loved Will you take my hand babe and be my dove

Down the ladder: No Tomorrow

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.090909
Weighted score: 7.0454545
Overall Rank: 34
Posted: October 26, 2007 3:17 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2007 3:17 PM PDT
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