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Ad Infinitum (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Most un-mighty history
Subtracting and extending
All at once
What vigorous suicide
To keep the living from dying
When the opposite is sought
And tiny ocean architects
Loft laughter from shore to shore
Swallowing each other's glee
Too feeble the wind
Sputters upon a dwindling flame
Whose tongue still mocks its breath
Forwarned men
Witnesses to disintegrating time
Await the end building hovels
While the women chase
Children from the horizon
Into their pathetic homes
A luminescent line
Retreats even from the eye
Until darkness treats their gaze
passes
And begins again
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7468
Posted: September 24, 2007 10:55 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2007 10:55 PM PDT
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