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Forbidden Time (Free verse) by sonawrote
Wish I knew where this was going
Began the journey fully knowing
Hearts get broken, lives get torn
Pierced myself on a roses thorn
Soft like petals, smells so sweet
A place to go, to hide, retreat
Lustful whispers, aching arms
Eating up the questioned charms
Wanting to be weak, to make you stronger
Wanting this moment .... a little bit longer
Escape into the dark of night
Pass on the reality fright
Why this way, why not forever
Came so close, in this endeavor
Seems to be, some ways a taunt
Was almost exactly what I want
But I'm not yours, and you're not mine
Our time is such a moralistic crime
But for a moment, the world spins round
Lost for a moment in what we found
Invisible sanctuary, that you can't see
The way your eyes look into me
Healing wounds inside my soul
Broken pieces, restored whole
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11523
Posted: September 20, 2007 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2007 6:29 PM PDT
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