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the stranger (Other) by Prince of Void
I always want you to understand What the stranger wants to say That stranger is standing and staring Right in front of you But simply ignored by you He’s always stranger to you you never accepted him As someone can be closer to you The tears of his eyes want to say Well where it will end how he could see the end of being a stranger But you still make him What he was before However he is a stranger But he knows you well He’s watching every moment of you He’s feeling you Every sensation you get thorough His presence lingers on In wherever life goes on One day he will stop you At that time he is not stranger anymore Since his words and feelings have been like yours he is not stranger anymore

Up the ladder: A place for everyone
Down the ladder: Homage

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8845
Posted: September 3, 2007 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2007 10:51 AM PDT
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[8] richa @ 82.2.211.159 | 4-Sep-07/3:26 PM | Reply
Sounds like a stalker to me. I read an article in the Grauniad today, a woman boasting about how a chap tried to talk to her in the supermarket and how she caused a scene by shouting loudly that his attention was unwanted and that he was sexually harrassing her. I think she went a bit over the top but still having involved intrapsychic conversations about a stranger is a bit James Blunt.
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