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the stranger (Other) by Prince of Void I always want you to understand
What the stranger wants to say
That stranger is standing and staring
Right in front of you
But simply ignored by you
Heâs always stranger to you
you never accepted him
As someone can be closer to you
The tears of his eyes want to say
Well where it will end
how he could see
the end of being a stranger
But you still make him
What he was before
However he is a stranger
But he knows you well
Heâs watching every moment of you
Heâs feeling you
Every sensation you get thorough
His presence lingers on
In wherever life goes on
One day he will stop you
At that time he is not stranger anymore
Since his words and feelings have been like yours
he is not stranger anymore
Up the ladder:
Sun (Pantoum)
Down the ladder:
inverse square
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Posted: September 3, 2007 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2007 10:51 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8772 Comments:
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richa @ 82.2.211.159
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4-Sep-07/3:26 PM
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Sounds like a stalker to me. I read an article in the Grauniad today, a woman boasting about how a chap tried to talk to her in the supermarket and how she caused a scene by shouting loudly that his attention was unwanted and that he was sexually harrassing her. I think she went a bit over the top but still having involved intrapsychic conversations about a stranger is a bit James Blunt.
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