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Stuck in Re-Verse (Lyric) by Alex Green
I feel stuck in re-verse Always rehearse and rehearse The very same lines and the very same words, But all I can do is curse. Curse the sky and curse the sea; curse you and, God, curse me. Curse all the things that we used to be; curse everyting. Now, promise me you'll find someone to put you at ease. Promise me you'll find your peace. I'm sorry for the things I put you through, But there's just some things that you can't undo. I'm sorry to say that I'm through - I'm through with me and you. Please don't think I won't miss the time that's gone by, But, baby, it just don't seem right That every day is a lie. Now promise me you'll find someone to make you happy. Promise me you'll find your peace. I feel stuck in reverse. I feel stuck in reverse.

Up the ladder: tourist
Down the ladder: Not so strong

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8039
Posted: August 18, 2007 7:54 AM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2007 7:54 AM PDT
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[n/a] Skamper @ 58.171.41.194 | 19-Aug-07/4:46 AM | Reply
go to the music shop and find some Cake, take it home, listen to it...sigh...
[10] MacFrantic @ 129.82.31.17 | 20-Aug-07/11:00 AM | Reply
If only these douchebags could hear you sing, Mel.
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