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not sure on a title lol (Free verse) by jerzeygirl22
Lately I've been thinking about how unlucky I am,
How sad this all is, how bad this all is,
All I have been doing is constantly complaining,
But as I think harder, look deeper,
Look at my achievements, my awards,
I realize, I did well in the past,
And I will just have to make those memories last.
As I sit in my room and cry,
All I am doing is let the happy memories die,
Not the memory of sport and pain,
Not the memory of my love for the game,
But the memory of what I was told,
The memory I let go and did not keep hold,
What I was told that sad, sad day,
The memory I let fade away,
Now that I remember what I was told,
I think, why am I complaining,
It is like the sun being out while it is raining,
Now, I am thankful,
Not ungrateful,
I appreciate,
Not hate,
My life, my path, my fate.
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Posted: August 8, 2007 1:16 PM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2007 5:55 PM PDT
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