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A Prophet (Free verse) by Dovina
A secret lay evaded
in wait for such as him,
a quite specific knowledge gap
efficiently disowned.
He felt uneasy, unsure why,
wrote a poem to work it out,
to set it straight within himself,
and sparked a change in me.
He produced a neat example,
reminding me of what itâs like
to get it right, and really right;
his process turned to cure.
The thing he deftly clarified,
I recognized as mine as well,
which worked against denial.
Heâd made his feelings mine.
I learned a secret, found a cure,
a specific failure rectified,
enlightened an experience,
had the thrill of recognizing:
âThatâs Right, and Really Right!â
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Posted: July 13, 2007 11:08 AM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2007 11:08 AM PDT
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