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Ladies (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Turn me around Into the ground Bury my carcass upside-down 'Cause where I'm heading Even sun won't shine on me As the wolf Said to the deer "You won't like what you're gonna hear But it's me or you and I'd rather have my way Ladies ladies ladies Kiss the foreheads of your babies If they start to cry Just rock them in your arms But I I I Can't be that simple if I try I'm heading down this road To a cradle nice and warm Turn me around Into the ground Bury my carcass upside-down 'Cause where I'm heading Even sun won't shine on me As the wolf Said to the deer "You won't like what you're gonna hear But it's me or you and I'd rather have my way

Up the ladder: Just Nonsense
Down the ladder: Finding a Definer Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9162
Posted: June 27, 2007 2:15 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2007 2:15 PM PDT
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[7] Skamper @ 202.6.132.32 | 27-Jun-07/4:49 PM | Reply
Lyrics? Has a sing-song feel to it
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