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The Reflection of Tonight (Free verse) by SomeNewKill
Lets bring ourselves to the reflection of tonight. To the place where
our thoughts replace our site.
Bring ourselves to this apologetic state. Where we forgive ourselves for
making our love wait.
But keeping up with whos around. We cant forget who we've brought into
this now. Tonight was a narrow hall.
Doorways on the way leading to the memory of it all. You were here. In
this bed. Not a thing was said.
As if this memory was dead. Its never been more alive. Its never had to
cause suspence. A sudden waking
moment to leave our reflections bent. Rolling over and facing you laid.
Looking for a new comfort in the bed long before made. Flipping through
photos of the places we've been. Where we made desires out of a camera
with a broken lens. Are you still here? I can feel you close by. Now
awake. The brush of hand to remove hues
of change from my eyes. There you are, with your arm around me like you
escaped dreaming wounded by lying next to its scar.
Only a few hours ago was tonight for you. But the necessity of sleep
brought to you it's mirror. Walking down a
hallway where my love was just passing through. The flash of camera,
found you waking to a morning never clearer. Now you find yourself in my
place. We are so perfect face to face.
Again saying sorry for love's anticipation of voice. My eyes open, my
favorite sound, these words of choice. I love you. And I love YOU.
Always this bed finds the love of two.
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Posted: June 1, 2007 1:36 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2007 1:36 PM PDT
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