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Atlantis Destroyed (Sonnet) by Sasha
Sound drowned on the sereneness of a sea
Unstirred and cool as a morticianâs eye
That holds pent death in livid memory
Behind a cheap blue knockoff of the sky.
Then morning tried to speak, but mused in rain.
Beneath an air where humans did not speak
And rare gulls needed treetops like a cane,
A land lay broken like a sculptured Greek.
There were no relics left of what had died:
A culture girdled to the verge of space
That killed itself to stones and never told
Of mastered gravity and death denied:
The fell aloofness of a priviliged race
Where all that mighty fusion had been cold.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5921
Posted: June 1, 2007 12:28 AM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2007 12:41 AM PDT
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