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From The First Time (Free verse) by forsaken
From the first time I heard your name spoken
My heart was already choking
Cause it had to fight to stay protected
As if it was in infected
With some kind of uncureable diease
So sweet but deadly it brought me to my knees
From the first time I was informed of your heart
I wished that I'd never hear of it falling apart
That I could hold to it keep it from harm
I'd treat it right tend to it like it had an alarm
One that never had to go off as long as I'm around
I never knew something so amazing could never be found
From the first time I saw you
I thought a second chance was true
Staring up towards the clouds above
I recall wondering if I might have found a dove
My heart lifted as if it was light like a feather
Upon your wings my pain was all better
From the first time I looked in your eyes
I knew I was looking at someone who would tell me no lies
Witnessed the ice melt off my insides
Wishing my feelings wasn't something I hind
But for one chance to let them show with you
I'd take on the world if I knew you felt them too
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.862069
Weighted score: 6.857465
Overall Rank: 295
Posted: May 29, 2007 2:17 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2007 2:17 PM PDT
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