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Smoke Me (Free verse) by Skamper
the notes written in chalk fade fast colours flash when wet- waiting on the rain to cry words from bleeding eyes hidden nightmare’s waves of fear race against the blooded veins shaking indecision cuts nicely nerve endings cracked and bloated breath slow - the rush over ask me – what happened it’s written in the chalk I can’t read or remember - the paranoia does She’s the one – hiding dusted fingers crossed behind her back

Up the ladder: The KINGS
Down the ladder: I like Cake

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7484
Posted: May 17, 2007 1:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2007 1:23 AM PDT
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