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Smoke Me (Free verse) by Skamper
the notes
written in chalk
fade fast
colours flash
when wet-
waiting on the
rain to cry
words from bleeding eyes
hidden
nightmareâs waves
of fear race against
the blooded veins
shaking
indecision
cuts nicely
nerve endings
cracked and bloated
breath slow - the rush over
ask me â what happened
itâs written in the chalk
I canât read
or remember -
the paranoia does
Sheâs the one â
hiding dusted fingers
crossed
behind her back
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7473
Posted: May 17, 2007 1:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2007 1:23 AM PDT
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