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The Invisible (Free verse) by Skamper
you look beautiful passion painted – sweat drenched from the darkness of the sheets - it took 6 days 14 hours and 23 minutes for you to see I coloured my hair - because I told you the back of your head never changes except when I cut it noticeable and taken note - I find knives a fascination even up the score - the duality of blades I could just leave - but my lips can’t leave the floor

Up the ladder: The Enigmatic Pentagram
Down the ladder: ADDICTION

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11509
Posted: April 17, 2007 3:16 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2007 3:16 PM PDT
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