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The Invisible (Free verse) by Skamper
you look beautiful
passion painted â sweat drenched
from the darkness of the sheets -
it took 6 days 14 hours and 23 minutes
for you to see
I coloured my hair -
because I told you
the back of your head
never changes
except when I cut it
noticeable and taken note -
I find knives a fascination
even up the score -
the duality of blades
I could just leave -
but my lips canât leave the floor
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11509
Posted: April 17, 2007 3:16 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2007 3:16 PM PDT
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