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Goodbye (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Well everything was groovy, just like the music in the movies but it looks like the rain outside's not going to stop too soon. We need a break from our mistakes and if you cry I might have to run the risk of saying goodbye to you just one more time, goodbye.I say goodbye because your heart is so much darker than the sky. I say goodbye to all the diamonds, gold, and other things. You might be surprised What a good heart-breaking brings

Up the ladder: Hand Grenades
Down the ladder: Dad

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9801
Posted: March 21, 2007 2:17 PM PDT; Last modified: March 21, 2007 2:17 PM PDT
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