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Free verse № 151091

Goodbye

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Mar 2007 · 0 comments

Well everything was groovy, just like the music in the movies but it looks like the rain outside's not going to stop too soon. We need a break from our mistakes and if you cry I might have to run the risk of saying goodbye to you just one more time, goodbye.I say goodbye because your heart is so much darker than the sky. I say goodbye to all the diamonds, gold, and other things. You might be surprised What a good heart-breaking brings

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