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Campfire (Free verse) by MacFrantic
That naked black light lantern in the sky burns up the fucking stars My putrefaction overwhelms your eyes And while the skinner in the forest gathers up his sodden things I'm spitting on the fire as it dies Feel the driving wind against your back and pull that final portion from your pack Oh how serene this evening and how colorful this twilight moon. I hope the clouds will bring my lady soon... It's raining for my master and his bright, emboldened, wicked dreams It's raining towards oblivion, it seems.

Up the ladder: conscience
Down the ladder: You say goodbye

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11537
Posted: March 16, 2007 11:25 PM PDT; Last modified: March 16, 2007 11:25 PM PDT
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[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 22-Mar-07/9:53 AM | Reply
Macfrantic, firstly you have a rubbish username, secondly this poem is moribund.
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