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Campfire (Free verse) by MacFrantic
That naked black light lantern
in the sky burns up the fucking stars
My putrefaction overwhelms your eyes
And while the skinner in the forest
gathers up his sodden things
I'm spitting on the fire as it dies
Feel the driving wind against your back
and pull that final portion from your pack
Oh how serene this evening
and how colorful this twilight moon.
I hope the clouds will
bring my lady soon...
It's raining for my master
and his bright, emboldened, wicked dreams
It's raining towards oblivion, it seems.
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11537
Posted: March 16, 2007 11:25 PM PDT; Last modified: March 16, 2007 11:25 PM PDT
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