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Winter on the Moon (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Nothing changes
An afterthought of an afterthought
becomes careless words in the afternoon
as you give me something to hate you for.
So I was nice, and it was good,
until my eyes caught your indiscretions.
You are a fallow, infertile fuck!
This must be your soul's wasteland
because the waves are giving me headaches--
tremors of heat that starve my spine.
I can see premier ghosting of
each memory on the horizon's face
as our voices quiver with it.
For each step towards losing you
I'll drink the poison from your simper
and you'll crow to me as always.
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Posted: February 7, 2007 2:54 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2007 2:54 PM PST
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